Friday, December 18, 2020

SLJ Monday December 14 task 1

 




I think that I could have asked a question and probably added more to the writing. 
The good thing about this is that it is very positive.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Hayley,

    Fiona here again from the SLJ team (-:

    You’ve written a great comment! I like that you start by giving positive feedback to Priya about her work, and then let Priya know what you like about it. Ka pai!
    You have written some good self-reflection too. I agree that next time, you could add asking a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.

    Remember, if you check out some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave a positive, thoughtful or helpful comment you will receive extra points! If you do this, remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form. .

    Keep up the great work!
    Fiona (SLJ).

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.