You’ve written a great comment! I like that you start by giving positive feedback to Priya about her work, and then let Priya know what you like about it. Ka pai! You have written some good self-reflection too. I agree that next time, you could add asking a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.
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Kia ora Hayley,
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You’ve written a great comment! I like that you start by giving positive feedback to Priya about her work, and then let Priya know what you like about it. Ka pai!
You have written some good self-reflection too. I agree that next time, you could add asking a question in your comment, as this could start a comment thread (where you reply to one and other), which is a great way for you to form connections with other student bloggers.
Remember, if you check out some of the other bloggers’ Summer Learning Journey posts and leave a positive, thoughtful or helpful comment you will receive extra points! If you do this, remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form. .
Keep up the great work!
Fiona (SLJ).