Friday, January 22, 2021

SLJ Thursday January 21 task 1

 


Here is my summer poem.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Hayley,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I think these poetry activities are my favourite, I like all the creative writing and descriptions of everyone's interpretations of summer. It is great to hear that you found this activity easy and fun.

    I think your poem is well written and I like that it is all about the moments you remember from this summer like what you saw at the beach and what yummy treats you ate. I also like that you included a list of your nouns and activating nouns, awesome job.

    Are you able to share the slides you completed on this post as well or to step it up include a clip of you reading your poem.

    I would also like to know which activities were your favourite this summer?

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.